Recently, some human think that family is important for children
to spend their time with. While others believe that it is not necessary for
them or sometimes it gives the negative effects. I argue that there are two
different opinions for both considerations.
It is certainly inevitable
that the family is the place where the children should spend their free time
with them. They can do many activities together such as sharing the problems
because the children who interact with the others might have the problems. And
it is properly for family to take the responsibilities to solve clearly those
barriers. To demonstrate, the children that have many kinds of different
attitude friends have to interact well with them. To make good communications
and relationships with their friends, the family can teach and guide them.
Then, they attempt to find the solution to solve the problems and it can be
done in their free time. As a result, sharing problem is necessary for children
to do especially with their family when they have free time.
On the other hand, the
children who spend their spare time only with the family have the negative
effects. To face this era, they should be a social person. By being a
socialist, the children must spend their free time with the others such as
teachers and friends. Additionally, they will get many new experiences from
interacting with each other or even becoming an independent person who can
handle so many other people. They learn how to be better in the future from
their experiences. For instance, if the children have good friends, they also will
share about good experiences. Thus, children get more knowledge from their
friends by communicating in free time.
For those reasons, I fully
endorse that the children should interact with the other people not only their
family but also the other people because they will gain many benefits for
themselves.
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